Baby.. when you’re gone !
I tried to play the song..
“Baby when you’re gone..”
Cleared the dust..
tuned.. my guitar,
tied the chords..
hit the strings..
hell.. that too sounds like
the broken thing..
like a ruptured soul,
with broken wings…
then I sung the next line
“days go on ‘n on
and night seems so long”
Picked up the pencil..
and the kit, tried to sketch
the beauties around..
my barren harvest..
the torment dusk
but no dawn..
hell.. that’s all, I could find..
“oh, this is torture, this is pain,
it feels like I’m gonna go insane”
my broken woes..
torn, horrid sketches..
the broken string..
and that song,
like the husky..
whisper in the distance..
“things just feel so wrong,
baby when you’re gone”
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this is really awesome!!! love this poem
This is lovely!!! & as Baby wen ur gone is one of my fav numberz 🙂 it adds 2d effect 😉
gr8 poem … but I would still say the writer to divert towards other needy 🙂
Great poem! Enjoyed the read!
hi sachin, its really an awesome poem , i liked it .
hey thats a nice one,but dont be so disheartened!!!
hey really awesome poem..
Enjoyed this…especially:
“like a ruptured soul,
with broken wings…”
nice work.
Heart Broken soul… great work 🙂
its great poem…..very nice…
i real like ur poems
this one is best
keep it up
keep going like this
🙂
🙂
its really very good.
the poem…… is awesum…..really very expressive….
keep it up.
good one
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