He, who died..
Its just, he was alone
for all those nights..
a hate.. for lives,
that he has, lived..
howling for his dreams
confined to his fears,
suppressing his tears..
he used to choke,
while trying to speak..
as if its ripping his throat,
but still he carved..
for another reason,
to cut it apart..
don’t know why,
he didn’t want to die..
from dusk till dawn,
heard him pray..
just for another day..
and on the day,
when he woke up..
and found the haze
‘n the fog inside,
The curtains wet..
windows open..
doors ajar..
has it rained.. ?
perhaps he cried..
last night… he, who died..!
nicely written
nicely written………..
good one…as usual…would have been better if ‘he’ would have been alive to feel his dreams coming true !!!
good one
Life teach us
To always dream
However it may never come true
But that’s the best way
To live life through
Life teach us
To dream so high
Never give up and always try
Never let go or say goodbye
Life teach us
That when there is darkness
For sure sunrise is the next
And when everything is so tiring
For sure there would be time to rest
Life teach us
To always care for a friend
Always be true and never pretend
Always love with no end
And the broken hearts try to mend
Life teach us
Never to feel the hate
Always be confident and never hesitate
Always believe in fate
Life teach us
People meet, few stay together
And few lives apart
So if you are one who have been left behind
Don’t cry and suffer
Just search for a new start
Life teach us
The past we must forget
And nothing we should regret
Life teach us
To open our heart and forgive
Cause that will help us to survive and live
Life teach us
To always offer our helping hand
And always try to understand
Life teach us
Not to be shy
If we have done something wrong
But to admit it and be proud that we have learned
A lesson that will help us to be strong
Life teach us
To live more
Seek for the happiness we deserve most
waiting for ur nxt poem….
Hmmm. . . . Nice. . .
Carry on. . .
Very good expression of raw emotions. Just thinking about the depth of your soul from which you poured this unique piece…
waiting for ur next creation
its heart wrenching.
Very well composed……with words echo the poignant story of grief.
i found this seductively haunting, painfully so, dark and sorrowful but with an echo that sounded familiar enough to follow to its source, and it reads well aloud
a repeating pattern
O this is very haunting, powerful, captured bleak so well 🙂